It was I~!

posted April 22nd, 2016, 12:00 pm

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April 22nd, 2016, 3:56 am

Ultimate the Hedgehog

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Hey all!

This page turned out longer than expected but oh well. Everything was necessary!

So we finally see things from the point of view of our mystery ladies and figure out who is the one who killed the man in the alley.

Now the confrontation can begin!



PS: The thing with Lydia's speech bubbles was totally by accident, but U left it because it seemed to fit.

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April 22nd, 2016, 9:59 am

TouhouShake

IT WAS ME.

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DIO.

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April 22nd, 2016, 12:31 pm

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I think you may wanna tone down the amount of blurs there.

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April 22nd, 2016, 12:35 pm

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Intense smear blur out of ten
I recommend lowing the opacity in the later of the blur on the first panel

Second Panel works I guess

Third Panel I would use a gradent transparent effect that fades out from the upper left and becomes clear in the bottom right

Fourth Panel is fine

Fifth Panel looks bad use the blur a little less like 5 pixels less

There is no more blurs after this

eat your cookies and milk

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April 22nd, 2016, 12:47 pm

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Gotta go fast. Gotta go murder mystery. Gonna be back in a flash. Okay I'm done.

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April 22nd, 2016, 12:59 pm

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@Ultimate the Hedgehog: This is mostly going off my first comment
http://i.imgur.com/fHHjRLF.png

Here's all the Motion blurs I typically use

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April 22nd, 2016, 1:05 pm

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@King_Rover: I'll admit I got a little lazy with the blurs.

The main focus was the dialogue between the characters. But I needed the first few panels for the sake of pacing and detail on getting from point A to B.
But that only means it's very important to make sure it looks good. I'll do better next time.

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April 25th, 2016, 11:39 pm

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@Ultimate the Hedgehog: Gotcha, it was just the thing that seem to call attention to, everything else is great.

Keep up the good verk

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April 22nd, 2016, 2:07 pm

BuddyT

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Lydia nO

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April 23rd, 2016, 7:16 am

Ink_wolf

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Motive? Aw, shucks! I always forget the motive.

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April 25th, 2016, 6:36 am

Spekkal_X2

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...I instantly love Lydia. She's amazing.

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May 2nd, 2016, 7:31 pm

Light-Called-Hope

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CAUGHT

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